If you can keep your heart when all about you
__Are stretching reason to its reasoned end;
Ignore all form and pretense, without scoffing,
__And jesting always, care that none offend,
If you refuse to wait, but praise each moment,
__And make it burst with dear, impassioned life,
Embody your full range of love and loathing,
__But not take sides in other people's strife…
If you can listen well without believing;
__And think—but grant your thoughts no special claim;
If you can meet with Triumph and Disaster
__And treat those two impostors just the same;
If you can celebrate with heart of gladness
__A world not known but glimpsed through veil of tears;
If you embrace the fullness of your losses,
__But see clearly past imaginary fears…
If you can laugh when nonsense that you utter
__Is analyzed by critics and deemed grand,
And write profound philosophy on water,
__Build a splendid castle out of sand;
If you can preach a sermon fraught with laughter,
__And, serving kings, become the jester's knave;
Disburse your treasures to the undeserving,
__And throw away the pennies that you save…
And cast your love with just this same abandon,
__Feel gratitude for joys that come your way;
Doubt neither your own virtue nor your brother's,
__Break every rule to guarantee fair play;
If you can lose your fear of squandered minutes,
__And fall in love with all that's free and wild,
Yours is the Void and all the life that's in it,
__And, Best Beloved, you can be a child.
It's a little-known historic footnote that when a young Rudyard Kipling submitted his poem IF for publication, the assigned editor was Lao Tzu whose name is sometimes translated as The Ancient Child. Indeed, the Master was more than 2400 years old at the time he served as Kipling's editor.
The upshot was that young Rudyard didn't understand where the Master was coming from and he simply re-submitted his poem to a more receptive editor. The result is the version we know today. But I thought that the Master's editorial revision might be of interest to some of my readers on this site.
Bravo; a brilliant re-rendering {and I bet he doesn't mind a bit!}